Self Reflection

Hi! I am critiquing this on the behalf of ! First, I really love this piece. Even though it's simple, it says a lot. I also like the two polar opposite ideas, admire and pity, and how it can make you more like your enemy or better than. It's definitely an interesting idea. My only comment is that since it's titled self reflection, I would have liked the sentences to reflect each other. So it would look something like this:

Blah blah blah
blah blah blah blah blah

blah blah blah blah blah
blah blah blah

But with actual words and in a manner that made actual sense. haha. Overall though, great work!