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People are walking tape recorders and movie cameras. They install so much information just by walking through the park. They also have a tendency to spy on each other. Always looking out their windows with telescopes and binoculars; with hunting rifles on their tables. The government needn't ever run surveillance; they'd only have to instal fear into their minds, which they have perfected in doing for years. They just have to let the people take care of the rest.
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. I really like this piece, although I think it would be better if it was broken up like a poem. I also think a few sentences are fragmentary and there was one misspelling. Also this part of the sentence which they have perfected in doing for years. sounds kind of awkward to me. I don't know why. Overall though, I really like this piece. Keep up the good work!
. I really like this piece, although I think it would be better if it was broken up like a poem. I also think a few sentences are fragmentary and there was one misspelling. Also this part of the sentence which they have perfected in doing for years. sounds kind of awkward to me. I don't know why. Overall though, I really like this piece. Keep up the good work!